It starts off a jolly bit of harshness, by saying, that "There is much amateurish writing in this collection, and a more serious lack of urgency: many contributors seem less interested in creating new myths than amusing themselves with borrowed ones, like fans dressing up for a convention."
I figured I was up for the slap down, but I actually come out pretty good:
"The other wild card in the collection is Ben Peek's ambitious 'The Dreaming City', announced as part one of a larger project: a grandiose attempt at a new myth of Sydney, based on historical research documented in straight-faced footnotes (maybe an appendix would do the job better in his envisaged novel). Here, the starting point is the late-career trip to Sydney by celebrity lecturer Mark Twain, who finds himself guided through the lower depths by Peek's surrogate - a kind of supernatural political entrepreneur, who hopes to use Twain's cultural capital to underwrite his revolution. On this showing, Peek has ideas, of the kind that would go down well at an interdisciplinary conference, but not the deep interest in character or language that would entirely bring the phantasmagoria to life. Still, I look forward to further installments."